Write a paragraph about something learned in class and how it will help with you career goals.

Paragraph covers one concept. Topic sentence. 3-4 supporting sentences and a conclusion sentence.

Here is what I have. Feedback would be appreciated so I know if it sounds ok. Thank you!

There are many advantages of having a growth mindset that will allow for better future success. The biggest advantage to me of a growth mindset is that a setback or mistake does not define who someone is and where they can go. Having a growth mindset allows a person to be more willing to learn from mistakes instead of giving up. Setbacks and failures are not the end of the road but merely a learning experience to help grow and develop. Having a growth mindset will keep me on the road to success for my future.
Asked Aug 02, 2013

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