I wrote a poem for a girl I have a huge crush on for 2 years now. I need your opinions.

She is a Mexican and I am an Indian.She kinda knows I have a crush on her :)


This is not just a little poem, but a little piece of me,
For a girl who is not just special, but also precious to me.

Anyone can be beautiful, because beauty is just an art,
But it takes a special someone to be beautiful at heart.

Every time I see you, its always like the first time,
Something new, something enchanting and its always love at first sight.

I thought it was just an infatuation, then I thought maybe its just a crush,
I don't know how I feel right now, but one thing that I know is that you always make me blush.

My hear beat rises when I look into your eyes, it skips a beat when I see you smile,
One little hi is all it takes, and I lose my mind and fly into space.

Today is Thursday, or as I call it "Date Day",
Come out with me and I will try and make it an unforgettable day.

Just you and me, in a table just for two,
But I still do hope that I can sit right next to you.

Hold your hand tight and look straight into your eyes,
Tell you all the things that I wanted to say for a very long time.

I wish I could speak Spanish, be as romantic as the other guys do,
But keep one thing in mind, Te Amo..Te Amo.. and thats the only thing I know how to do.

Awe. It gave me goose bumps! Very well written! You should tape it to her locker with a flower! Or something cute like that. It's good to know that some boys have some romance left in them!

Awe.. Guys like u stil exsist.. how sweet.. :))
shez so lucky:D

aww that's so cute!!

Thats sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute!!!!true love right there